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I strongly suspect this may end up my one and only venture into this fandom but darnit, this (and, admittedly, a stomach bug) was distracting me from my Supernatural fanfic and I NEEDED IT OUT OF MY SYSTEM.

Title: Hush
Fandom: Sherlock
Pairing: One-sided Sherlock/John
Rating: PG13 for eavesdropping as voyeurism.
Word count: 614
Summary: Having John Watson as a flatmate isn't quite a stroke of luck.
Spoilers: Episode one, "A Study in Pink"
Author's Notes: Written for "Secret Admirer" for [profile] schmoop_bingo!



Sherlock was quite certain his finding John Watson for a flatmate was what most people would term lucky. John was a man of reasonable intelligence, enough that conversations with him were generally quite bearable, enough that when he didn't use that intellect to full capacity it was deeply irritating. John was not yet a lost cause.

He was also lucky in that while John presented himself as a relatively normal man he was surprisingly adaptable. Sherlock had waited for the inevitable verbal reprimands for taking his shoes off in public or lying down in the landing whenever he felt a headache threatening, but found John simply rolling his eyes or stepping over him without complaint.

Lucky, however, was a relative term and one Sherlock would scarce apply to himself under the current circumstances. One of the greatest pleasures in life to him had always been the sound of Mrs Hudson's gas boiler kicking into action, the sound of old fashioned, inefficient, but curiously reliable equipment doing its job, hot water spraying in the shower. Any previous flatmate who made the mistake of singing in the bathroom would normally be subjected to whatever level of abuse was required in order to have them leave, a deserved punishment for distracting him from the soothing nature of the shower's own chorus.

Unfortunately, John was proving distracting in this area in an entirely different way.

Sherlock had never paid much attention to the shower's occupants before, but when John took a shower he would find his mind wandering. He studied the sounds to work out water placement, the moment John stepped in, the break to apply shampoo, rinsing, washing arms and chest quickly and efficiently, legs following, always slowing a little at the parts he imagined to be tender.

Building a picture in his mind of how John showered had been distraction enough, though at least the regularity of John's showering rituals allowed him some peace of mind, but then one evening the pattern changed for no good reason; John paused at what should have been his legs and stayed there, a change in pattern maddening enough Sherlock got out of bed and walked to the bathroom, fully intending to knock and demand John tell him what, precisely, he thought he was doing in the shower for that length of time.

Increased proximity to the shower meant increased clarity as to what was going on inside it, leading Sherlock to back up against the wall opposite the bathroom and slide down it, sitting and listening, not quite sure how to process what he was hearing.

John was masturbating in their bathroom.

Sherlock couldn't think past that, the thought of John standing in the shower, one hand braced against the wall, the other on his erection. It felt strange to acknowledge, almost difficult, because he knew of sex, the idea of it and appeal of it, but it was something he had never taken much personal interest in. The thought of John as a sexual creature was altogether a little jarring.

Orgasm came and Sherlock stretched out on the floor, pinched his thumb tight, a little reflexology to try and fight a growing headache; he frowned when John opened the bathroom door, bright light from within the bathroom scarcely helping his headache.

John looked down at him and side-stepped him carefully, switched off the bathroom light. "You'll have to try harder to get a look up my towel," John said, before heading for his own room.

Sherlock considered protesting that he'd had no intention of taking a look, but found himself silent.

Protesting would have been dishonest when, in retrospect, he rather regretted not trying to look.



The End

Date: 2010-07-28 10:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scarletsherlock.livejournal.com
If ever I could imagine Sherlock Holmes as overtly sexual, let alone gay, let alone thinking of Watson that way, it would be something like this, yes.

Sherlock considered protesting that he'd had no intention of taking a look, but found himself silent.

Protesting would have been dishonest when, in retrospect, he rather regretted not trying to look.


BWAHAHA. ♥
Edited Date: 2010-07-28 10:03 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-07-28 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
:D for some reason all other Sherlock adaptations I've read him as more or less asexual, but in this modernised version (I blame the fabulously named Mr Benedict Cumberbatch's eyes) I can see him considering the possibility XD. It's not quite - hmm, it's not quite actually thinking of himself as fancying John in any way, more that around John he has a moment of "Dear diary, questioning sexuality; think I may have one!".

Thank you so much for commenting hon <3. I had fun with this, made a change from writing sheets and sheets of Castiel angst for Casfest XD!

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Date: 2010-07-28 10:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vinylsigns.livejournal.com
You have no idea how delighted I am that you wrote this :D

Date: 2010-07-28 10:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
XD I don't know what it is, I find Benedict at once unattractive and incredibly sexy. It's a sort of Alice Krige thing, there's something almost reptilian about his face and it does things to me.

I am holding to that as my reason for finally giving in and writing Sherlock Holmes naughtiness despite the fact that Robert Downey Jr is also sexy as anything and I've never got around to writing porn for him!

Thank you for commenting my dear <3 <3 <3!

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Date: 2010-07-28 10:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rachel2205.livejournal.com
Hee! Awesome. Also, I have totally been turning over in my mind a fic that actually has a related sort of theme, so I would say DAMMIT YOU BEAT ME TO IT, but I think there is room for lots of witnessed/overheard masturbation in our fandom, yep! XD

Date: 2010-07-28 10:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
True fact; there is ALWAYS more room for masturbation XD.

Thank you for commenting and I'm glad you had fun <3. I look forward to seeing your fic as well if you do go ahead and write it :D!

Date: 2010-07-28 10:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azure-horizon.livejournal.com
lol

Perfect. I absolutely adore that ending

Date: 2010-07-28 11:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
XD

Glad you do <3. Thanks for commenting!

Date: 2010-07-28 11:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Yes... I can definitely see this one. (Or hear it, rather.) Sherlock's brain has to do the unexpected every now and then, if only to save him from boredom!

Date: 2010-07-29 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
I just love the whole idea of Sherlock and the BBC update really brings to the surface the fantastic idea of a man who genuinely is too intelligent for his own good (though the admittedly deserved arrogance alongside his intelligence scarcely helps!), so it's a lot of fun to picture how that would apply to relationships or the idea of them ;). Thank you for commenting!

Date: 2010-07-28 11:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] horusguard76.livejournal.com
Oh this is lovely! Short but reveals so much about the chemistry between them and also about each character.

Great story. <3

Date: 2010-07-29 03:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
Strange but true, I'd been wondering about an hour ago today if anyone had iconned the picture in your icon - I'm glad to see the answer is yes!

Thank you very much for commenting :), I'd like to write something more for this particular version of Sherlock if something comes to mind, but getting a short fic out of my system was an absolute necessity!

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Date: 2010-07-28 11:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kitchensexslave.livejournal.com
Thrilled to bits you wrote this, loved what you did!

Date: 2010-07-29 03:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
\o/

(also, not that you'd be interested or anything, it looks like my blurb before this fic was a "spoke too soon" moment as the second I went back to my Dean/Castiel writing ANOTHER John/Sherlock scene popped into my head! I may be here a while...)

Date: 2010-07-29 12:09 am (UTC)
sea_thoughts: Ruby in *The Legend of Ruby Sunday* (Sherlock - worldincoffee)
From: [personal profile] sea_thoughts
I love this because Sherlock has never really been interested in ANYONE in a sexual way before and even now, he's only just sort of realising "Am I interested in John? Is this what it's like to be 'interested' in someone? Or maybe I'm just interested in why he picked this day of all days to... I think I'm getting a headache."

Brilliant.

Date: 2010-07-29 03:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for this comment :D. It's basically exactly what I was going for - the idea of Sherlock being almost outright confused by the very possibility he might, maybe, have a sexuality. There's a good chance I may write something naughtier in the future for these two, but I think this is the closest I can see them genuinely getting to one another ;).

I'm really glad you liked this! :D

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Date: 2010-07-29 04:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earsnwhiskers.livejournal.com
Oh this is brilliant, exactly how I can see him processing information. Love the ending! <3

They are so cute together, no matter what they think they are to each other lol

Date: 2010-07-30 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
Hee, thank you! And I'm glad you liked the ending, teasing thing that it was ;).

They are cute and terrible and ridiculously hot together, I adore it.

Date: 2010-07-29 05:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] randomalia.livejournal.com
Wow, yes. Somehow this is incredibly hot, even though they don't even touch, are barely in the same space as each other. Nicely done.

Date: 2010-07-30 03:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
:D thank you so much! For some reason I find these two really, really, really hot together, despite the fact Holmes/Watson, even played by Robert Downey Jr and Jude Law, have never really pinged me as a sexy couple before.

I'm glad you found this hot, hon. Thank you for commenting :).

Date: 2010-07-29 07:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shiva-chan.livejournal.com
You should totally write more Holmes and Watson. ^___^ Because this was wonderfully adorable. I always picture Sherlock as RDJ now, and Watson as Jude and it's wonderful. RDJ's gorgeous puppy eyes~~~ lol

This BBC version... All I can find on isohunt is the radio collection... is that it?

Date: 2010-07-29 09:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] entropynchaos.livejournal.com
I don't know if this will work for you, but if you torrent (so useful!) then try this - http://eztv.it/ep/21628/sherlock-1x01-a-study-in-pink-hdtv-xvid-fov/

It's really worth having a look at.

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Date: 2010-07-29 08:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilka.livejournal.com
Oh yes, Sherlock just automatically building up a mental picture from the sounds of the shower is spot on. And of course Watson just steps over him and goes about his day :)

Date: 2010-07-30 03:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
*hugs*

(I am hugging you ohsotight through the Internet because today was pretty dreadful but reading any comment from you gives a day +90% awesome)

You'll probably hate a fair bit of what I write for this fandom, having got into bad, porny habits from my other fandoms beforehand ;), but it was a lot of fun writing something that, while technically slash, is still pretty gen XD.

Thanks for commenting gorgeous, I'm glad you liked it :).

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Date: 2010-07-29 09:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rivana.livejournal.com
I actually laughed out load for real at this one. Really well written. Lovely pun. Characterizations spot on.

Date: 2010-07-30 03:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you so much! I'm glad it gave you a giggle :). I can't promise to always get the characterisations right but I'm willing to give it a try!

Date: 2010-07-29 03:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miya-morana.livejournal.com
This is absolutely perfect and makes me regret I don't have a Sherlock icon. :)

Date: 2010-07-30 03:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
<3 <3 <3

*hugs*

(It is a pretty amazing show)

Date: 2010-07-29 03:25 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ladygray99
I love this look into Sherlock's mind. I'd love to see where it goes next.

Date: 2010-07-30 03:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you! :), I think half the entertainment value of a new fandom is I don't really know where anything could be going yet, I'm still just playing around, seeing what feels right and what feels fun.

Thank you for commenting!

Date: 2010-07-29 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paregmenon.livejournal.com
This is utterly fantastic :D

Date: 2010-07-30 03:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
Thank you :D!

Date: 2010-07-30 03:49 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] captain-tibbs.livejournal.com
Absolutely wonderful!
Holmes has always been an asexual creature in my mind, purely through his absolute disinterest in anything other than one of his cases.
This adaptation however does lend itself wonderfully into new arenas of exploration, and this fic is simply beautifully created to both mesh this idea of lack of sexuality with the possibility of redefining one.
♥ &gearts; ♥

Date: 2010-07-30 03:49 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] captain-tibbs.livejournal.com
oops!
♥ ♥ ♥

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Date: 2010-07-30 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lupus-malus.livejournal.com
Yes! I've just watched the first episode. This is great. I love your characterisation. Cataloging John's actions in the shower by the sounds he makes is so Sherlock.

Date: 2010-07-31 12:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
Hee! I don't know the characters well enough from any other medium to comment on this modern remake in detail but damn, I love the idea of it and of Sherlock himself :D. Glad you liked this; thank you for commenting!

Date: 2010-07-31 06:59 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] ajodasso.livejournal.com
Hee, oh. Poor thing <3

Date: 2010-08-04 03:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
Hehe :). Thanks for commenting! <3

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Date: 2010-08-15 08:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hobbylobby.livejournal.com
I'm on a Sherlock fic splurge and just read your fic. It is really amazing and nicely in character. I hope you write more! :-)

Date: 2010-08-19 03:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emerald-embers.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you very much my dear :). I do hope to write more for this fandom at some point, though I can't swear as to when/if it will happen!

Date: 2010-08-31 04:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cuz-i-could-yay.livejournal.com
Best. Ending. EVER. EVER!!!! HOMG. <3

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